Indie Snippets is currently closed to submissions.

Thursday, September 1, 2011

From "Faithful Deceptions" by Melissa Ohnoutka

Faithful Deceptions: A Novel of Suspense
Money dictates the rules of this game and the victim could be anybody— regardless of sex, age or race...

A wicked grin eased over Dustin’s face, his entire body frothy with victory.  Once again, success. This was one of those magic moments that made the multitude of tedious planning hours and hard work worthwhile. Moments that lured him back again and again. It had been a long time since he’d actually been the one to pull the trigger. After Rodney and Dwayne’s little screw up with the Senator’s daughter, he had no choice but to kill her himself and had been itching to do the delectable deed again ever since. He loved to smell the fear. To see the moment his victim realized he and he alone controlled their fate.

Dustin waited only long enough for Agent Bryce to lower his head in defeat. Then the second earth shattering explosion rang out beneath the blanket of rain soaked trees. It was done.

Now to plan his most horrifying, unimaginable affliction against another human being.

Patrick Roark, bodyguard his ass, would pay a hefty price for his treacherous betrayal.

And he knew jus the sweet little trick to use too.


Teri Thackston said...

I've read this book and it is exciting and really wonderful story.

VICKI BATMAN, a sassy writer of sexy and funny short fiction said...

Wow, Melissa! Wonderful, wonderful excerpt. You are awesome.

William Simon said...

Scary stuff! I've read FD, and cannot recommend it enough...:)

Anonymous said...

I've got chills....


Post a Comment